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First poetry work I found that begins and ends with songs, and so disparate in mood. I like the end and inside rhymes strewn all across the poem, though sometimes I felt the work is a bit random at times, and the meaning or flow of the work was off-track to placate a rhyme.

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Nico Jaramillo
Nico Jaramillo

Written by Nico Jaramillo

Writing essays about literature for the Common Reader

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